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CopyPat · 10-05-2018, 12:03 AM

Sup bodes
hmmmmm this was interesting to me. the beginning was honestly trash:

Holy mackerel, I’ve been an asshole. Worse than a rascal handin a cashed bowl to a cattle of crack hoes tied to a lasso"

you have to know this is NOT good at all..

It'd be a lie if i couldnt mention that i get high to Intervention like a deprived-n-cryin meth-head fightin that inner tension. Antidepressants with scanty life-lessons leaving me handy for wreckage, the manic depressive who panics and wrestles with Xanax and devils, completely disheveled

YES PLEASE!!! Now we're talkin. really good.

rest was ok. better than first 2 lines by a million but very average.

last few lines were weak again too... i think it's more along the lines of your scheme... lasso wacko back hoe blah blah is just boring as hell.. last few lines take a shit take a hit, make a dick shake my tits...same.. boring.. too easy, anyone can do that. play with better more interesting words, feel me?

10-05-2018, 12:03 AM	#7
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	Sup bodes hmmmmm this was interesting to me. the beginning was honestly trash: Holy mackerel, I’ve been an asshole. Worse than a rascal handin a cashed bowl to a cattle of crack hoes tied to a lasso" you have to know this is NOT good at all.. It'd be a lie if i couldnt mention that i get high to Intervention like a deprived-n-cryin meth-head fightin that inner tension. Antidepressants with scanty life-lessons leaving me handy for wreckage, the manic depressive who panics and wrestles with Xanax and devils, completely disheveled YES PLEASE!!! Now we're talkin. really good. rest was ok. better than first 2 lines by a million but very average. last few lines were weak again too... i think it's more along the lines of your scheme... lasso wacko back hoe blah blah is just boring as hell.. last few lines take a shit take a hit, make a dick shake my tits...same.. boring.. too easy, anyone can do that. play with better more interesting words, feel me? __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.