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Old 10-03-2018, 04:57 PM   #4
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Not sure if this was JDs first time with haikus if not probably first with this topic. I think he did pretty good. But I even read both twice and both times just seems like hush been doing this shit for years...i may not like hush that much but this was real cool to read, maybe I'm really high but to me it seemed almost like hush made it rhyme, when looking at it, it obviously doesn't...maybe that's the inner point to creating a good haiku? Whatever..cool shit from both vote hush

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