Body I thought Face railed was a cool tie in. More gassed up than a fuel canister is a pretty solid punch for a set up. However, I think the metal to both sides/bannister flip was a pretty basic flip. Overall I think it was a solid punch. The set up outshine the punch though.
Amen had a fire concert that was held back a bit by the wording. Set it up pretty well. The meteorite wp was slick af to me. The problem is the connections a bit loose. Like meteorite kinda seems like a random phrase thrown in? But you do tie in one of the meanings with shooting stars down. On the same note, I thought shooting stars down and the bar as a whole was a good angle to take.
Overall, I think Body had really good execution on a not so great concept. Amen had decent execution of a great concept. Im leaning towards Amen and his complexity in this one though. The meteorite was nice wp even if it’s not tied in personally. Overall it was a good angle as well.
This one is close but I gotta edge it to Amen.
Mvgt Amen
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