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Listen · 09-30-2018, 07:31 PM

u mads a disgrace, ya battle in the 1-2 got u slapped in the face
i know that 'elegance' Viper was rough... but damn cant u have it with grace

Okay.

this kid just annoys, my boys pick where i shoot n they get to the point
so when the metal goes up, my team yellin heads n tails, im flippin a coin

Wording was off here. Decent.

tough guy a merc? kill u and ya partner, if u bluff u get hurt
so step into my office and get sent home with a box, tough day at work
Again, good concept but could’ve been re-worded to add more impact.

im slumpin the jerk, u never get in holes the scrub just appalls
watch me swing n fuck up John Daly... then take a club to his balls
lol. Good.

ur fearin the slug! eye contacts not a thing he wears like a thug
one blastll put ya in orbit, he wont look at the heat like hes scared of the sun
Eh.

I don't give your bitch my time, u really think this "dimes" fine?
We know ur just Pressin Zero's the way Scorekeeper on the Sideline
Not feeling.

I'll shoot u before you blink, should be a felon w/ it dude
Showed up while u Scrambled & Bledsoe much it's irrelevant what u Drew
Okay.

Took ur wife from ur fake ass, she see's that when I flex it I blast it
The day I met her she threw away Scoring & it wasnt no S.I Classics
Okay.

During the pod I had that bitch suckin, her head right by the glock bro
& when u see the bullets the Mag Cast it won't follow w/ Friendly Convo
Nice.

U got that Syndrome u slow fuck, smoke ur tard ass while Im recordin
& wash your bloody shirt w/ Downy cuz it tortures u watching me pour it
Na.

Okay battle. I think JD was better written, while Score had the better concepts/punches. In all, I could oversee the wording from Score enough to appreciate the punchlines.

v/Score

09-30-2018, 07:31 PM	#7
Listen Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 41 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 3760711	u mads a disgrace, ya battle in the 1-2 got u slapped in the face i know that 'elegance' Viper was rough... but damn cant u have it with grace Okay. this kid just annoys, my boys pick where i shoot n they get to the point so when the metal goes up, my team yellin heads n tails, im flippin a coin Wording was off here. Decent. tough guy a merc? kill u and ya partner, if u bluff u get hurt so step into my office and get sent home with a box, tough day at work Again, good concept but could’ve been re-worded to add more impact. im slumpin the jerk, u never get in holes the scrub just appalls watch me swing n fuck up John Daly... then take a club to his balls lol. Good. ur fearin the slug! eye contacts not a thing he wears like a thug one blastll put ya in orbit, he wont look at the heat like hes scared of the sun Eh. I don't give your bitch my time, u really think this "dimes" fine? We know ur just Pressin Zero's the way Scorekeeper on the Sideline Not feeling. I'll shoot u before you blink, should be a felon w/ it dude Showed up while u Scrambled & Bledsoe much it's irrelevant what u Drew Okay. Took ur wife from ur fake ass, she see's that when I flex it I blast it The day I met her she threw away Scoring & it wasnt no S.I Classics Okay. During the pod I had that bitch suckin, her head right by the glock bro & when u see the bullets the Mag Cast it won't follow w/ Friendly Convo Nice. U got that Syndrome u slow fuck, smoke ur tard ass while Im recordin & wash your bloody shirt w/ Downy cuz it tortures u watching me pour it Na. Okay battle. I think JD was better written, while Score had the better concepts/punches. In all, I could oversee the wording from Score enough to appreciate the punchlines. v/Score __________________ time.