lmao pretty sure this is just that Rap-Royalty guy
he tends to be on his religious shit from time to time
this one isn’t him at his best
too many rhymes ending in the same word, repeated
obv meant to be all poetic sounding but just comes off a little hackneyed and maybe lazy
word choice isn’t interesting enough to keep the readers interests either and it’s convuluted with poor structure and line breaks that ruin the rhythmic flow
not the worst thing I’ve ever read but just tryna be real
he’s better than this piece makes him out to be
it reads like a keystyle
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