Hmm the more I read this, the more I like the battle.
Amen, I think you had the more complex line. I’m feeling the concept. I think there were some slight wording issues, but overall you set this up pretty well without telegraphing the punch. I like the punch because you tied in saying he’s ugly with calling him a pussy with it. The issue with me is Blue in the face is just really played. I haven’t been here long and seen it multiple times. Plus I can’t rmemeber the battle (maybe Bolo?) but someone just got criticism for using Blue in the face like last week. Overall I still liked the punch but that’s the glaring issue.
Blue while I don’t think your lunch had the complexity that Amen’s had, your concept was the more creative. I think you took a huge risk by flipping Ra. I know a good but about the Egypuan gods so I like it. I think the Ra/applause flip is creative af. My critique is the flip doesn’t work both ways perfectly - it feel slightly stretched. More specifically you wouldn’t say ‘Amen Ra’ you’d just say Amen if thatbmakes sense. I think it was such a clever flip that I still think the line was pretty nice.
This ones close. This can go either way and probably Comes down to preference and how you feel about blues reference. Amen surprised me here but I got Blue slightly edging this.
Mvgt Blue
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