Des had a nice punch imo. It’s simple but calling Cash grand wizard was funny and it helped set up the punch in a subtle way. The punch itself was a pretty good flip. I think the end of dudes arms and tiki torch leaking oil parts coulda been worded more concisely, but not a big deal. Only real critique is heard a few tiki torch punches after the Charleston stuff but this was pretty fresh. The personal aspect pushed this bar over the top.
Cash I thought you used a good angle. Pretty relevant personal. I like where you were going tying the personal into a bar bout fucking his wife. I think the stick in her can part held back the bar. I understand it’s not a gun bar, but at the end of the day, you’re still flipping stick and can. It was kinda funny and I like the personal br the flip wasn’t that crazy. I think overall it was still a pretty good bar but I got Des edging this one.
Mvgt Des
|