Knuck: I loved your take on the picture. The way you interpreted the picture was fucking great. It stood out and went against the norm of what it was "suppose" to be. I thought all your lines were well written and went exactly how you wanted them to go with your perception of the pic. I love shit like this. Only thing is you should have written more. The concept you had could have been more developed and expanded upon. You could of got me with concept but it fell short verse wise.
Witty: The concept for your verse was what I would expect from the picture. The only difference was you had a pretty good ending to your verse. I liked it it. It was more creative than I thought it was gonna be and when it came to the flow of your lines it was on point. Nice drop
Overall: I loved Knucks concept a lot better it was out side the box and that's what I look for. Only thing is he didn't pounce on it. He dropped a short verse unfortunately. Witty's verse was more common but he had more times to show his rhyme skills. and his ending was what really got my vote. Painted a picture in my head.
Vote: Witty
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