Flow, I think this was a tough angle to use. I think for you to use a Amen wife bar it woulda had to be either REALLY funny or REALLY harsh for it to have impact. You took the funny route, and it was kinda funny but didn’t feel fresh or funnier than any other amens wife bar. Also if pegging had a double meaning it prob woulda went a bit harder. I’ve read this a lot and can’t figure out if it is.
Amen had a pretty good punch. I think the blood clot/Jamaican flip was pretty nice. It’s simple but I’ve never heard it before surprisingly. I think you definitely could have set up the punch better. It didn’t really relate to the punch and you didn’t have anything to transition from the two different ideas in your set up and punch. Regardless I think the concept was fresh enough to get the win.
Mvgt Amen
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