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Cash came solid fucked with pretty much every bar even the odd light jab was tasty.

Dyn... Strange name btw man you realise we got someone with the same name nearly bro you open yourself up to angles just there. Anyway you got the concept of writing down so that's good. You need to work on harsher angles or wording for greater impact. You had the structure of good bars here just when I finished I struggled to recall a bar I was like yeah that was dope. Rereading through I'd say lil pump the best bar for me. The opening bar I disliked despite it being good to see you done your homework an went for a personal angle.

Vote cash but keep it up Dyn an just consider how harsh your bars are an then up it some more