JD pretty good punch. It flowed pretty good. The concept itself was good. You probably could have worded it more concisely and it felt a bit long winded but I like the punch.
Witty I think you took a step down from the heat you been dropping the past few weeks. The bar felt a bit rushed. The flip wasn't that clean. The typo messed up the bar a bit too. Went with a current event reference, but the execution wasn't really there.
I got JD here.
Mvgt JD
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