This was like a battle of rhyming statements...didn't see a lot of actual punchlines.
I'll try to break it down though.
Flo: first bar referred to his losses as high as his post count, but didn't even connect them that well... on top of the fact that it's one of the most basic lines you can write.
Second was just as simple and dry, but at least it was a little more hurtful.
The no pride was too obvious to not have been used, not executed fresh either.
Come back line was probably ur best, but was still played and lacked execution of a real concept.
Blow up dolls are played, and that was not a new twist, and didn't make sense really.
Pryde: first bar had negative sting to it.
The lottery ticket line wasn't crafty at all but it was aight.
Who's varuq?
I see what you tried to do there with the repeat line, but that was not good in any sense.
Last bar had cool flow but no punchline, just a statement.
Really hard to judge. Pryde was a little fresher with a couple concepts but I thought flo had better execution. I see what everyone else is saying but I honestly thought Flo had it, by a pube.
V/Flo
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