[Amen]

Originally Posted by Big Bolo

Havin trouble dude? go have a couple brews with u know who
Be sure u have him map out da night, but word is diablo already draws up bars for u!
Ok concept but executed ineffectively, bro. Was more or so statement'ish rather then an insult, if that makes any sense? Does to me.
This mfer signed outta 1-2 after losin to Mr. Blue eyes with the picket fence
Went back in a week later and to nobodies surprise...haven't won a battle ever since
Pretty basic. Pretty much same as bar above, bro.
Round after round gettin fucked like Flo REAL....hardly!
I see it like dis...he was fed up & decided vs cash to have his own comin out party
Lol, basic but cool jab here. Could have been executed harsher but ok none the less. Got a chuckle out of me which is what you should AIM for if you are going to stay writing on the basic side, dude.
Name chosen startin with F? Nah homie listen bolo was born a G
Cuz when I slide by every alpha with the finger movin I aint txtn on my HTC
Don't know what you're talking about.
I'm like quick draw mcgraw its over ur gone! u'aint seen what I'm bustin
Ya fam beggin the news to blast ur face over the TV like a new Marvel production
No idea what you are referencing here either.
He don't make any money workin those long hours, don't front ur awfully fable
When he really on all fours & take shit all day, profile occupation: The coffee table
This doesn't make much sense to me? On all fours and taking shit all day? What does that have to do with a Coffee table?
Figure out wat he dreamin of, gut ur fav place like I'm remodeling a kitchen
sick? Riiight its that time of the month so his head isn't the only place'll be leakin crimson
Light jab.
Working all night? were not sure what you do give a fuck tho, I'll blast this fool
Got a straight shot to his dome but I aint holdin down Alt with the lasso tool
What? What's a lasso tool?
Flow isn't one of the greats on board that flight has been in flight
Ur moves all yesterdays news like current posts when clock strikes midnight
Like the concept, hate the execution.
U a bitch I can see it from a far, flow couldn't even get past par
I'm an eagle to this wolF dropped in at the last minute like its a Cashius bar
Who's par? This bar doesn't make much sense to me either.

Originally Posted by Flow

Fuck a drive by I'll invade your entire neighborhood when I spray
Glocks from every direction like the whole street against you, Denzil in Training Day
Like the concept - not the execution. I think it would have been better if not executed with a simile.
Your no Keyser Soze, no upset win for the retard pretending he's more
Cus if we see a Big twist at the end its after ive smashed his fuckin mug to the floor
Don't understand this.
Got more in store for you then what you failed to beat so far, bolognaise n bland bars
Shit you struggled with the source so much Prego wanna use your face to brand jars
Light.
N this clown mask robberies wit the swayze pulls, shits so shoddy
Cus this Keanu faggot only trys to shoot after hes fallen an caught a body
Get the reference, however the delivery/wording and execution sucked.
Jobless geek, hes playing D an D while im fuckin chicks n sipping henny
I make a Big Bang for my buck, you can't even watch the show without thinkin how you'd do anything for a penny
Again, get the reference but wording, delivery and execution was bad.
Yankee gun bars stunned by a European villain with C4 at the thumb
Yet soon as i unstrap the peice it will be your body falling from the top like him in die hard 1
Light.
Son the limes got speed signs saying youll never reach my level, not even near
I had Clocked your Number on the Board before I even stepped up a Gear
Wording bad.
Chase you around the house with the chopper, bullets for days bitch
my Hammer shooting through every wall like Thors did in Dr Stranges
Don't watch these types of movies so not sure what you are referencing here.
N no one seen schad for ages cus my personal game insane
To you id do the same, but your such a nobody even after this body I wont remember your name
Nobody concepts are overdone. Not enough of a fresh execution to pass.
N adding 6 lines shows you shook kid, need ya sheep to vote or I've took this strolling
An if Lil Bo Peep again I'll give him a bigger Hook then the one shes known for holding
This was clean. Nice overall and probably your best well rounded bar as far as the concept, it's wording, how it was delivered and executed.

I got FLOW here. Bolo's got the rhyming/structure aspect of text battling down. He needs to work on his concepts and executing them more harsh and effectively.