This is a good battle.
Inliked JD’s line - I thought it was clever. I do feel like you went for the low hanging fruit with this one. Worded well but the fillip wasn’t that difficult to execute. Overall this was still good though.
Viper came with some heat. Pull a round out the glove is a good tie in. Some wording issues there but the general concept of it is good. Gametime is slick. Tommy John was dope and you tied it in well. Works pretty good both ways. Overall good bar
Nice battle but I got Viper taking it with a well out together line
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