Score: the wp was kinda witty. I’m lenient with my wp because I think the wp woulda worked if you said it live. However, its forced. You can’t just call him a pig/pork outta no where...you coulda saved this for Zelph.
Dy I thought the set up the lunch pretty well. You had a couple stretches in the actual punch. LED doesn’t really work because it’s L-E-D. This one isn’t as bad but ‘wording is slightly off for “leave score clocked”. It feels forced cus it would have to me ‘clocked’ to fit perfect. I think the concept was good though. Name play was pretty good except for the fact that the flip wasn’t clean.
Both punches had forced aspects to them but I think Dy had the better concept and his reaches were as big of reaches.
Mvgt Dynamicz
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