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Old 09-03-2018, 01:39 PM   #8
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Originally Posted by Big Bolo View Post
Havin trouble dude? go have a couple brews with u know who
Be sure u have him map out da night, but word is diablo already draws up bars for u!
Not bad
This mfer signed outta 1-2 after losin to Mr. Blue eyes with the picket fence
Went back in a week later and to nobodies surprise...haven't won a battle ever since
Lol not too strong but this was funny
Round after round gettin fucked like Flo REAL....hardly!
I see it like dis...he was fed up & decided vs cash to have his own comin out party
Not feeling it
Name chosen startin with F? Nah homie listen bolo was born a G
Cuz when I slide by every alpha with the finger movin I aint txtn on my HTC
Cool
I'm like quick draw mcgraw its over ur gone! u'aint seen what I'm bustin
Ya fam beggin the news to blast ur face over the TV like a new Marvel production
Kinda weak
He don't make any money workin those long hours, don't front ur awfully fable
When he really on all fours & take shit all day, profile occupation: The coffee table
Lol coulda been done better but funny
Figure out wat he dreamin of, gut ur fav place like I'm remodeling a kitchen
sick? Riiight its that time of the month so his head isn't the only place'll be leakin crimson
Not bad
Working all night? were not sure what you do give a fuck tho, I'll blast this fool
Got a straight shot to his dome but I aint holdin down Alt with the lasso tool
Kind of obscure I'm guessing this has to do with photo shop, not terrible but kind of a soft punch
Flow isn't one of the greats on board that flight has been in flight
Ur moves all yesterdays news like current posts when clock strikes midnight
Good concept I guess but worded bad
U a bitch I can see it from a far, flow couldn't even get past par
I'm an eagle to this wolF dropped in at the last minute like its a Cashius bar
Nah cause a lot of people drop late but the concept was good maybe tie it in with something else besides 'Cashius bar'
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Originally Posted by Flow View Post
Fuck a drive by I'll invade your entire neighborhood when I spray
Glocks from every direction like the whole street against you, Denzil in Training Day
Not bad
Your no Keyser Soze, no upset win for the retard pretending he's more
Cus if we see a Big twist at the end its after ive smashed his fuckin mug to the floor
Not feeling it
Got more in store for you then what you failed to beat so far, bolognaise n bland bars
Shit you struggled with the source so much Prego wanna use your face to brand jars
Nah
N this clown mask robberies wit the swayze pulls, shits so shoddy
Cus this Keanu faggot only trys to shoot after hes fallen an caught a body
Nah
Jobless geek, hes playing D an D while im fuckin chicks n sipping henny
I make a Big Bang for my buck, you can't even watch the show without thinkin how you'd do anything for a penny
Stretched but I liked the concept here
Yankee gun bars stunned by a European villain with C4 at the thumb
Yet soon as i unstrap the peice it will be your body falling from the top like him in die hard 1
Better
Son the limes got speed signs saying youll never reach my level, not even near
I had Clocked your Number on the Board before I even stepped up a Gear
Cool
Chase you around the house with the chopper, bullets for days bitch
my Hammer shooting through every wall like Thors did in Dr Stranges
Nah
N no one seen schad for ages cus my personal game insane
To you id do the same, but your such a nobody even after this body I wont remember your name
Nahh
N adding 6 lines shows you shook kid, need ya sheep to vote or I've took this strolling
An if Lil Bo Peep again I'll give him a bigger Hook then the one shes known for holding
Damn this could have been ill, you did alright w/ it

Going w/ Bolo here

You both had some misses but his didn't miss as hard as Flow's.

Some of Flow was a little too stretched and he could have done more w/ the concepts if he delivered them better.

Bolo had funnier lines imo even tho all of them weren't big hitters
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