Bolo I like the concept man. I def think it was dope that you tried something different and risky. I think it was light at best though. There just wasn’t a impactful punch to bring everything together.
Amen I liked your punch this week. I think you always have good ideas, but sometimes the execution isn’t crisp and concise enough. That wasn’t an issue with the bar though. Blow up his temple was a good. Ounh was nice. Only issue is I wouldn’t really refer to a bullet as “blowing up” someone’s temple - maybe explode or something in his temple or something. Didn’t take away from the bar much though.
Bolo, I like what your were going for but I got Amen taking this.
Mvgt Amen
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