homie we know ur on the down low, just a poser that pretends
i mean how could u hide it, sparks fly when dynomight gets lit up from the end
(Okay. The flip was basic imo and I’ve seen similar concepts on enbombz. Wording pretty good although I think you could have set it up better)
stop the games bro its enough, u never tote its all a bluff
only way u could stomach having a gun on u, is when i shove this shotty in ur gut
(Feel same about this as above. The flip was pretty basic and the wording isn’t perfect both ways. I’ve seen this concept done and slightly better recently)
stop pretendin’ with the knucks son, we know ur not a real one
my uppercut’ll make dyno soar so high, he’ll crash land like the meteor that killed em
(You’re new (I think) so this not really your fault but still can’t give you a G pass. The wording is pretty good and crisp but Dinosaur has been done a bunch on dynamicz so this felt played. The execution wasn’t bad though)
ur talent level isnt flames, judging off of skill this cat is lame
i mean ur such an awful competitor, jalen ramsey should of dropped ur name
(Lol funny current event reference. This was okay. The reference saved you because the flip wasn’t stellar)
dont act like ur about the streets, we know u live the suburban life kid
only time u took multple shots in front of ur home, was on ur prom night bitch
(Lol funny diss to me. It’s a shot/camera shot flip which is pretty basic but this one landed for me because of the humor)
n we know ur not a scrapper, i’ve read the scout reports my nigga listen
if ur in a fight w/ might, he wings his punches n gets dropped quicker than the chicken
(Ahhh I see where you were going with this. You set this one up well. Wings his punches were cool. ‘Dropped quicker than he chicken’ wasn’t a great way to end it. You needed a stronger association here like drop into the frier. Cool concept but fumbled it at the end)
One punch and your mouth will break
Now u not a fake . Rhinos suppose to have bones coming out they face
(This was grimey. Think you coulda worded the “now you not a fake” part better but overall this is good)
Woman don’t give u a grain of respect. Sex u ain’t coming close
But if Rye bred I’ll slice that kid to pieces like the fucking loaf
(Maybe I just remember too much lol but yeah someone just used a rye bread np on him a few weeks ago. Regardless, I think you flipped this a bit too basic)
You couldn’t cut it where I chill if u went and got a knife
This animal a get his insides spilled tryna hang around the party.. that’s piñata life
(Okay this is solid. Wording definitely needs to be cleaned up but the concept was good. This landed)
If I catch you out on the avenue believe ur headed for death
Cuz I ain’t hesitating to spill ya DNA on the strip like a pregnancy test
(DNA/blood flip is ehh to me (b/c no one would call blood dna) but this was pretty cool. On the strip tied in nicely. This is decent)
Playing with me ? U better off playing dead
Knock ya eyes nose, ears off. Leave holes in they place u mr potatoe head
(Okay. I see where you were going. Knock eyes ears and nose off doesn’t really fit - seems forced in to make the concept work. Once you get past that - leave holes in they place is pretty good. Not a bad closer)
Pretty good battle imo and I enjoyed the read. Both guys got plenty of potential.
Ryno, I thought you caught the short end of the stick though this week. You had bright spots but you also had a lot of concepts I’ve seen before. Not always your fault but I think you coulda came with more creativity.
Dyno had some nice hard hitting concepts. I think you had the better concepts and also your execution was a notch above Ryno’s imo. I think you edged this one.
Mvgt Dynomight
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