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DynamiCz · 08-26-2018, 02:04 PM

I shoot 30 for 30 w/a gun so big...I'm walkin like I'm pregnant
So tune in & 'watch me air out this sob story' like an E:60 segment

Ehh, this was decent, feel you could have worded this way better I feel. Lol the walking pregnant thing is ight

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Go ahead & try it. All that shit talks worthless if u can’t hide behind it
Grip beside me N clip behind me...That metal standing taller than the Iron Giant

Damn Two, you just slighty over worded this here imo. I def like the concept, but I feel that "Grip beside me N clip behind me" area kinda makes the execution lacks.

Props to both, I seen Body do much better and im only giving this to him by a small margin due to the wording of Two bar. If two wording would have been slightly better in areas he would have took this.

V-Body

08-26-2018, 02:04 PM	#13
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829181	I shoot 30 for 30 w/a gun so big...I'm walkin like I'm pregnant So tune in & 'watch me air out this sob story' like an E:60 segment Ehh, this was decent, feel you could have worded this way better I feel. Lol the walking pregnant thing is ight ---------------------- Go ahead & try it. All that shit talks worthless if u can’t hide behind it Grip beside me N clip behind me...That metal standing taller than the Iron Giant Damn Two, you just slighty over worded this here imo. I def like the concept, but I feel that "Grip beside me N clip behind me" area kinda makes the execution lacks. Props to both, I seen Body do much better and im only giving this to him by a small margin due to the wording of Two bar. If two wording would have been slightly better in areas he would have took this. V-Body __________________ ...ThA New ErA...