I am getting very very tired of stick bars tbh.
Plot - this was very cliche...I saw it coming from a mile away, it wasn't a bad punch...you delivered it decently. But very predictable.
Flow - I absolutely love this idea, but the bar itself made no sense...it was quite forced. It could have been so much more.
Quite underwhelmed here...both have so much more in their arsenal.
Voting Plot.
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He listens to voices inside of his mind
Explicit and poisonous violent crime.
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