Plot think you’ve had a lot better bars here. Look like a vampire hit you isnt much of a flip - pretty statementish. Horror movie wasn’t too much of a tie in. I think I see what you were going for with double taps your neck but it wasn’t strong to me.
Flow no hate bro but the bar just doesn’t work. Ima give you the benefit of the doubt and assume hammer ain’t referring to what I initially thought. But yeah it doesn’t work because you can just make up your own lingo. I get the ‘hammered your competition’ but you can’t just use that to start calling him hammer. This coulda been a good concept but yeah I got it missing.
I got plot edging this one.
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