cool battle here, I think both bars are pretty nice
JD - Nice wordplay tat I haven't seen done on him tbh... good LoL factor on the nameplay and I think the way you finished the punch of 'telling me what to massage next' was a good tie in and way to go about it
Bleak - also a cool nameplay with an effective current event tie in.. the 'heart' part feels a little tossed in imo but fair enough & the race tie in worked well
Honestly this will prob come down to personal preference for voters as both were soid nameplays, I like John Dillinger's a bit better so he gets my vote
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