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Originally Posted by BodySnatcher

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If I roll up in ur hometown…

My new gun'll catch a body. I’m up in ATL just to spray son
U’ll see the Hawk on ur chest Sooner than later...nigga this Trae Young

hawk on ur chest played....even w recent event to create relevance

But if we’re talking drive-bys...then I got ur head in my range
So I’ma roll up & put a 'nickel in ur mug' cuz ur life is begging for change

super played

My burner will send rounds down ur lane w/a bowler handle
So if sun rolls up...then I’ma let him 'absorb more heat' than a solar panel

like this....set up was clever too...fire

U smelled the belt for a week but that'll all be a blur soon
To me a shipment...putting u in a hearse & scent in a box like perfume

wording off....tried to do too much here

Shit, if ‘Dy rolls’...it’ll be an execution cuz my straps realer
This stick will push ur shit back to the end of the table like a craps dealer

I guess this is cool....to the end of the table made it weird for me tho

Put up ur wifey in a bet. Cuz if u really wanna battle, fuck it
By nightfall, she’ll be howling as I’m ‘doggin the walls’ like a shadow puppet

I had a better one of these.....this was cool tho and I haven't seen it much

I got my arm extended to ur throat...nigga, ur soul’s mine
After '2 clips leave him hanging by a thread' like he ran into my clothesline

I like how these set ups r relevant and have plays in them too

I’m taking bets & ur waving the white flag. Boy, u'll die first
Cuz we know where everybody’s Cashius...& it’s nowhere near Diverse

only works one way but this was clever to me....and funny lol

Stick bigger than ur family tree. It’ll clap till ur dome is blown
I’ll plant miCz & put his seeds in the air like the Bird Lady in Home Alone

this was fire....how has no one thought to do this? props

Flow, JB & now Dy...I left all these niggas dead from the mag
I’m like a vendor collectin coins how I’m leaving w/ all these heads in a bag

eh not really

Originally Posted by DynamiCz

Lets stop the jiving...Jabari Black name flips kept you surviving
When i flip somethin! The machine lift body in the air--Indoor skydiving

this punch style is dead...and it only really works clean with a one word punch reveal........the concept itself is average

You gotta prove me! All my friends dead when i slide this Lil Uzi
When i give a couple clips inside the whip, it ain't a Drive In Movie

super played....wording was off...an not flipped well enough to ignore the dated concept

Never forget! When i carry the stick, don't even question legit
I get to aiming the shit....that mean the gun on body like a weapon permit

too simple

The nina bad as a model..I fire! The bullet cooking out the knozzle
This light ain't for charcoal! I'll have his top red like a Kingsford bottle

this is ok////

AR hang like a midget down my calf! I keep the pole low like Ralph
Gun butt...leave body structure in dents like i started a paragraph

lol this was cool

Im in the streets..State Trooper! See you in traffic..i will shoot ya
Spot his 2 door..an lean the can over the sunroof like the Redbull Mini Cooper

bang bang bang

Glad you made it this far! I take the hostage route when i plug a star
Big ass rope....that u'll pull bodies across the surface like tug of war

wording hurting u...concept cool....cant give u a pass on poor wording in the finals my guy

I can spot BS a mile away...lurker! Watching Phone Booth helped this murder
In the window with a sniper...looking through more scopes then a biolab worker

played

U'll need a eulogy! Big bully...right before he die im snatching his jewelry
The laser tag him...when i flash lights in the building like mall security

this was cool....simple tho again

You see what im holding..looking like a medieval knight when im strolling
The blade come out in the shop! I let it chop body down like the car stolen!

cool simple clean

I think dynamics simple style hurt him here.... last round it worked nicely against blue bayous overly complex style....but this week with body having a mix of complexity AND straight forward gun work I thought it made dynas efforts look glaringly weaker. as if to say...yea I can flip gun plays in a gritty format but also do it with complex ideas and fresh spins.......body was including flips in his set ups which speaks towards the depth of his ideas....dyna ideas were really simple....which again I think worked well last round but hurt him here....dynas wording and storytelling is awesome....love how he walks the reader thru his bars but I need more depth in the concepts at this stage of the game....especially when text is this far along and especially especially when smack is this far along......u have to really go above and beyond to flip a clever gun bar for me because ive seen and heard a lot of them over the years/

I dug this battle tho and these are the battles I want to be reading when im here. this was a dope tourney...you guys are the new blood of nc.....stick around....we need you.


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