This dude OUTDATED. Missed ur window w/ me, don't pick this route, slime
I'll slide on dark nights in the jungle... &the last thing seen is this Slender man's outline
Hmm, bleak I think the wording alittle choppy here. Shit would have hit a lot harder, but still a cool read no lie!
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Gunbar? Try a salad bar & Kanye Lipo cuz u dumping is a scandal
Cuz we all know if fat boy came off the hip the only thing he'd grip is a love handle
Ave had a love handle bar, but these two are TOTALLY different. Second line kinda stretched a little, but overall this still was a nice jab for me
I woulda honestly had bleak if his wording was better, but I got BS on this one. His bar was overall just structured better and it made the line hit harder then yours. Props to both tho
V-BS
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