This is a nice battle. Flowed nice. ‘Kool Moe’ didn’t really have a double meaning so that was one of the negatives. But I thought you ended the punch well. It takes a good pen to end punches without using similes so props for that. Also it did feel slightly SnF but overall, I liked the bar.
Viper, idk where tf this came from but that punch was nice. The set up coulda been better but was fine. Work with the tools was a cool little tie in. Let a hammer talk like bob the builder is fire and pretty funny to me too. Only critique is the too/hammer/construction flip has been done before - but this one was different.
Overall, vipers punch had more impact and landed harder imo.
Mvgt Viper
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