Cool battle here two idk something doesn't sit right with the bar to me...maybe I'm breaking it down too much, I mean first you shot him and his dawgs, then killed him again in his home with I can only assume his family. Just seems like you had 2, second lines couldn't figure out set ups for them so you just put them together. Still was pretty cool but Dyn was also graphic with it, painted a picture along with overall decent concept so my vote goes to him.
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