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Old 08-21-2018, 04:16 AM   #16
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BODY

My new gun'll catch a body. I’m up in ATL just to spray son
U’ll see the Hawk on ur chest Sooner than later...nigga this Trae Young
googled but yeh
But if we’re talking drive-bys...then I got ur head in my range
So I’ma roll up & put a 'nickel in ur mug' cuz ur life is begging for change
ok
My burner will send rounds down ur lane w/a bowler handle
So if sun rolls up...then I’ma let him 'absorb more heat' than a solar panel
niiiice
U smelled the belt for a week but that'll all be a blur soon
To me a shipment...putting u in a hearse & scent in a box like perfume
Yeh, I like it
Shit, if ‘Dy rolls’...it’ll be an execution cuz my straps realer
This stick will push ur shit back to the end of the table like a craps dealer
hmmm, ok
Put up ur wifey in a bet. Cuz if u really wanna battle, fuck it
By nightfall, she’ll be howling as I’m ‘doggin the walls’ like a shadow puppet
LOL concept flys
I got my arm extended to ur throat...nigga, ur soul’s mine
After '2 clips leave him hanging by a thread' like he ran into my clothesline
lol
I’m taking bets & ur waving the white flag. Boy, u'll die first
Cuz we know where everybody’s Cashius...& it’s nowhere near Diverse
yep!
Stick bigger than ur family tree. It’ll clap till ur dome is blown
I’ll plant miCz & put his seeds in the air like the Bird Lady in Home Alone
This was cool, nothing more
Flow, JB & now Dy...I left all these niggas dead from the mag
I’m like a vendor collectin coins how I’m leaving w/ all these heads in a bag
meh ok, kinda felt like it needs a stronger closer









DYNA
Lets stop the jiving...Jabari Black name flips kept you surviving
When i flip somethin! The machine lift body in the air--Indoor skydiving
Gooood opening
You gotta prove me! All my friends dead when i slide this Lil Uzi
When i give a couple clips inside the whip, it ain't a Drive In Movie
Soz lad, I don’t get this, cba to do the indepth research needed, ill presume its ok lol
Never forget! When i carry the stick, don't even question legit
I get to aiming the shit....that mean the gun on body like a weapon permit
another name flip, feel like this could have been stronger
The nina bad as a model..I fire! The bullet cooking out the knozzle
This light ain't for charcoal! I'll have his top red like a Kingsford bottle
ok
AR hang like a midget down my calf! I keep the pole low like Ralph
Gun butt...leave body structure in dents like i started a paragraph
nice concept, don’t mind the name flips aswell long its there fresh
Im in the streets..State Trooper! See you in traffic..i will shoot ya
Spot his 2 door..an lean the can over the sunroof like the Redbull Mini Cooper
googled but yehhh
Glad you made it this far! I take the hostage route when i plug a star
Big ass rope....that u'll pull bodies across the surface like tug of war
nahhh, doesn’t even rhyme for me
I can spot BS a mile away...lurker! Watching Phone Booth helped this murder
In the window with a sniper...looking through more scopes then a biolab worker
cool
U'll need a eulogy! Big bully...right before he die im snatching his jewelry
The laser tag him...when i flash lights in the building like mall security
meh
You see what im holding..looking like a medieval knight when im strolling
The blade come out in the shop! I let it chop body down like the car stolen!
best nameflip came at the start imo



I’d go with body here, liked more of his stuff, smoother wording and execution throughout, both closers lacked fire
Solar panel line was LOTB
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