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Old 08-19-2018, 03:13 PM   #9
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Originally Posted by BodySnatcher View Post
My new gun'll catch a body. I’m up in ATL just to spray son
U’ll see the Hawk on ur chest Sooner than later...nigga this Trae Young
No
But if we’re talking drive-bys...then I got ur head in my range
So I’ma roll up & put a 'nickel in ur mug' cuz ur life is begging for change
Old concept lacking a fresh twist.
My burner will send rounds down ur lane w/a bowler handle
So if sun rolls up...then I’ma let him 'absorb more heat' than a solar panel
Sun/Son word plays crazy played on semen/seamen & Da feet/defeat levels but the execution was fresh so dope.
U smelled the belt for a week but that'll all be a blur soon
To me a shipment...putting u in a hearse & scent in a box like perfume
Again scent/sent plays are outdated but liked your execution here.
Shit, if ‘Dy rolls’...it’ll be an execution cuz my straps realer
This stick will push ur shit back to the end of the table like a craps dealer
Stupid as in wack not dope.
Put up ur wifey in a bet. Cuz if u really wanna battle, fuck it
By nightfall, she’ll be howling as I’m ‘doggin the walls’ like a shadow puppet
Wording off, didn't like this one.
I got my arm extended to ur throat...nigga, ur soul’s mine
After '2 clips leave him hanging by a thread' like he ran into my clothesline
Pretty dated concept but liked your flip.
I’m taking bets & ur waving the white flag. Boy, u'll die first
Cuz we know where everybody’s Cashius...& it’s nowhere near Diverse
Wasn't feeling this one.
Stick bigger than ur family tree. It’ll clap till ur dome is blown
I’ll plant miCz & put his seeds in the air like the Bird Lady in Home Alone
Horrible and another "Stick" mention... Be creative, dude.
Flow, JB & now Dy...I left all these niggas dead from the mag
I’m like a vendor collectin coins how I’m leaving w/ all these heads in a bag
Light.
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Originally Posted by DynamiCz View Post
Lets stop the jiving...Jabari Black name flips kept you surviving
When i flip somethin! The machine lift body in the air--Indoor skydiving
Wasn't feeling this one.
You gotta prove me! All my friends dead when i slide this Lil Uzi
When i give a couple clips inside the whip, it ain't a Drive In Movie
Light.
Never forget! When i carry the stick, don't even question legit
I get to aiming the shit....that mean the gun on body like a weapon permit
Jesus, another stick bar lol... This was OK.
The nina bad as a model..I fire! The bullet cooking out the knozzle
This light ain't for charcoal! I'll have his top red like a Kingsford bottle
Light.
AR hang like a midget down my calf! I keep the pole low like Ralph
Gun butt...leave body structure in dents like i started a paragraph
Doesn't even rhyme.
Im in the streets..State Trooper! See you in traffic..i will shoot ya
Spot his 2 door..an lean the can over the sunroof like the Redbull Mini Cooper
Ok.
Glad you made it this far! I take the hostage route when i plug a star
Big ass rope....that u'll pull bodies across the surface like tug of war
What?
I can spot BS a mile away...lurker! Watching Phone Booth helped this murder
In the window with a sniper...looking through more scopes then a biolab worker
Light.
U'll need a eulogy! Big bully...right before he die im snatching his jewelry
The laser tag him...when i flash lights in the building like mall security
Light - could have expended on the laser tag concept IMO. Kind of ditched a potential dope concept to execute with a simple and weak one.
You see what im holding..looking like a medieval knight when im strolling
The blade come out in the shop! I let it chop body down like the car stolen!Light.
This was close. I think Body's verse was a little more versatile rather then dropping gun bar after gun bar and sounding really redundant. Dyna had some ok shit - nothing too bad but just came off repetitive to me... Like EVERY bar was a gun bar. I wouldn't mind if they were all dope but they weren't. Dopest gun bar in this battle was that Solar Panel one by Body. As far as consistency - Dyna landed more shots - majority very light but landed as where Body had some struggling bars that missed completely for me.

Body had 4 questionable bars that I did not like.
Dyna had 3 questionable bars that I did not like.

Tough call... Body's Sun panel bar was my favorite out of the entire battle and his verse was the least redundant so I'll have to edge this one too him. I thought the punches I did like from him landed more effectively as were Dyna landed punches - they weren't effective tho.

v/Body
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