Lol Des you a fool. I enjoyed the bar for the comedic value. Dy flips a bit easier than Dyna or Dynamicz flips but this one was creative. My critique is the way you ended the punch wasn’t that clean. The wp is choppy at best when you try to fit the meaning both ways. The comedic value makes this a good punch though.
Dy has a good punch as well. I say this all the time but punching in the set up really elevated the bar. Subtle little flip in the setup was nice. The punch itself was good as well. Not the craziest concept but the execution was nearly flawless. Only critique is you wouldn’t typically use that withdrawal phrase.
Overall it’s had dope punches. Des made me laugh but Dynamicz executed his bar better imo. Close but I got Dynamicz edging this one.
Mvgt Dynamicz
Good work fellas
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