Lol rhyno I like the concept. Funny np. The wording wasn’t bad but the phrase ‘to have my homie leave him drilled like a bitch’ was a bit flat. This also coulda benefited from a better/more tie ins.
Body I think your punch was even funnier. Good concept. Execution was pretty good. Only critique is the execution was lazy. It woulda took a while to get if I didn’t have a gif. I do think the concept carried you though.
You didn’t enough to squeak by with he win but not by much cus Rhyno was on ya ass.
Rhyno I see you bruh. Been having good punches but you’ve just been put in front of better competition.
Mvgt Body
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