Netcees - View Single Post - LIGHTNING ROUND: Jabari Black (7-2) vs. Flow (6-5)

DynamiCz · 08-13-2018, 07:26 PM

I’m not for play. We can scrap, bitch - fuck letting the chopper spray/
Wrong word and you’ll get slammed over a foul line...you gon need a Dr. J/

This was dope! Wording was good and the impact lined up just right with this punch to play off his name.

Flow line was ok, the rhyme scheme was a bit stretched for me on the 2nd bar so it threw the impact of the punch off to me. Props to both tho, I got JB

V-JB

08-13-2018, 07:26 PM	#10
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829181	I’m not for play. We can scrap, bitch - fuck letting the chopper spray/ Wrong word and you’ll get slammed over a foul line...you gon need a Dr. J/ This was dope! Wording was good and the impact lined up just right with this punch to play off his name. Flow line was ok, the rhyme scheme was a bit stretched for me on the 2nd bar so it threw the impact of the punch off to me. Props to both tho, I got JB V-JB __________________ ...ThA New ErA...