Big Bolo - nice flow and solid execution. Even though it was more of a s&f type bar it wasn’t too bad at all. Good stuff.
Exist - yo just pm me and I’ll help you out. The problem with your punch is first of all you’re describing his looks when we don’t know how he looks, then you follow up with an out of the air punch. Definitely not the worst I’ve seen but you gotta come up with actual concepts and schemes
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