Thought I'd drop some comments on a piece of yours before you 1-2 punch me in the face this week lol...
Really like your openin' bar...maybe not quite worded like that but yeah, dug it.
Hush is right...you need to flesh this out, I respect it's a draft & you probably wanted some sorta feed to see where you wanna take this from here...but the foundation is solid imo fam, this could (& should) be turned in2 some really mean ass topical.
But do you nigga...stay upwards.
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