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Pharaohs Army · 08-13-2018, 03:18 AM

I recall you using 'cease and desist' in another piece not too long ago.
Not a big deal I suppose.

This piece is probably good, but over my head. Not really getting the meanings. But I did google Aramaic attitudes and Latin declensions.

black linen sorcerer manipulating metal in frost-
bitten temperatures

insect humming click surrender your army

to CTA windows

Laramie / Divison

amplify, appetizers made of capital interest

appetizers made of capital interest? what? finances?

The rhyming is pretty good, per usual, especially in the 2nd half.

EDIT I'm sorry I'm not a better reader for you dead man.
I am smart though; so maybe you just write weird stuff.

Like, I say to myself, what could this black linen sorcerer manipulating metal in frost-
bitten temperatures possibly mean.
I don't know, a blacksmith out in the cold? wearing black linen?

08-13-2018, 03:18 AM	#2
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	I recall you using 'cease and desist' in another piece not too long ago. Not a big deal I suppose. This piece is probably good, but over my head. Not really getting the meanings. But I did google Aramaic attitudes and Latin declensions. black linen sorcerer manipulating metal in frost- bitten temperatures insect humming click surrender your army to CTA windows Laramie / Divison amplify, appetizers made of capital interest appetizers made of capital interest? what? finances? The rhyming is pretty good, per usual, especially in the 2nd half. EDIT I'm sorry I'm not a better reader for you dead man. I am smart though; so maybe you just write weird stuff. Like, I say to myself, what could this black linen sorcerer manipulating metal in frost- bitten temperatures possibly mean. I don't know, a blacksmith out in the cold? wearing black linen? Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 08-13-2018 at 03:34 AM.