New to the site but other than that.. I got Death with the W.. Serious: 1 syllabus count is weak..Try 3 or like your opponent do 2. Your ideas were ok but the wording could be structured better.. Death: Props on the opener but heading towards the middle I felt you started to slack.. Didn't like the fact that you talked about his girl for 2 reasons. Are you battling him or his girl? And the 2nd one is, does he even have a girl.. Overall decent battle.
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