[PancakeBrah]

Lol'd hard at trying to make your lines match.

This was good. None of that hokey nonsense in your usual topical pieces. Using a topic as a framing device for a technical flex. I even caught all your mathematic magic rhymes, my guy. "Taught them crafts" to "factually perceive" was your best stretch, and the first half was more consistently strong than the second, although the second was still good it just had a few more hiccups in wording in my opinion. But

That was masterfully conceived
to capture all reality -- in a fragment, or a piece,
of a fraction, or a tease, of a fractal, that repeats,
every similarity, that we can factually perceive.

Yeah that was pretty slick. Good use of punctuation to let the reader know the cadence.

I think it's pretty easy to write these scheme heavy pieces when you use soft sounds. Hell, when I used to write I traded in this type of language exclusively,. It's just so easy to slant rhyme and keep the "flow" sounding smooth using this type of language. But that's no overall knock on this piece because it was executed well. Ditch the exclamation point at the end.

Thanks for the read.