Body your execution was really good here. The punch was worded well and set up well. Very clean punch. I think the critique is the concept is a bit dated and the flip wasn’t very complex
Chyeahhh your creativity is off the charts. The bar was essentially a triple entendre with bubbles playing off the posieden underwater theme, the blowing bubbles chewing gum thing, and a cut bubbling up from a stab wound theme. I’ve never seen that since I’ve been here and I’m pretty impressed. The critique though is the wording wasn’t clean and the execution was average at best. I think it really held back what coulda been a crazy line.
Man his one is really tough to judge. i think Body clearly has the better execution and Chyeahhh clearly has the better concept. I think Chyeahhh was really ambitious with his punch but I think it paid off here. I’m pretty impressed that you were able to incorporate three themes in the punch. I narrowly edged this one to Chyeahhh
Mvgt Chyeahhh
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