Bleak I spent my whole morning defending gun bars and you gonna come in here and betray my like this lmao??? Lol I’m jk but forreal though the concept is fire but the punch just didn’t work. Flash from bystander woulda been a nice tie in, I like the carousel concept, by “metal slide down the barrel” doesn’t really mean anything.
KS the Bieksa wp was actually pretty slick imo. You could have cleaned up the wording but that was wp was pretty nice and you tied it in well. I didn’t completely catch the ‘1 punch’ll have your face...’ part but I can pretty much get it from the context. This was actually a pretty nice punch.
I gotta give this one to KS. BLeak shot him self in the foot here because he def has the talent to win this.
Mvgt KS
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