Gun so big, I got a cannon at my shoulder like Michael Vick, bullets knock him back farther than a Josh Allen throw
My ruling on this field is always upheld surprised you took some timeout, do not challenge, bro.
(This lines to long. The scheme wasn’t bad but it had too much going on. Plus it’s easy to do that kinda word association when your bars are so long. Miss but not by much)
I’ll be showing him the stick whiles he’s in bed, don’t try n hide brother, just like with Dy’s mother I’m close
Maybe just cock the bat, since I’m a fly swatted, if Dy wanna go, this bugs insides might color my cloths
(You channeled your inner 2trip in this one lol. I google bars I don’t get but I don’t even know what I would google lol. This was all over the place)
I won’t rest the gat until his body’s 6 feet in land and nothing on his Stone slab is written.
At a party, it’s like high school student who hate Chemistry lab, ain’t no body glad when ‘mics in.
(I like this. The wp was cool. Your wording held this back but you’ll improve that if you keep battling)
All my guns accord, I’m wired to kill, if you don’t think I’ll brawl all out yet
I’ll be putting metal in you n never get a charge, that’s what we call a broken wall outlet.
(GOOOO! Lol my nigga this is nasty. Accord wp and wired tie in were dope. The punch itself was dope. Good work)
Change ya tone..or have the led mark you a X-that's a chromosome
Headshot..When this instrument in my hand create a concussion..it aint a idiophone
(Team google is outchea. So a concussion idiophone is aparently an instrument but I have no idea what kind. The punch checks out but this reference is obscure. Punch in the setup was pretty good though. Overall this landed - but not by much)
Imma get you gone...the trey five on each side of his cheek...Home Alone
Gun literally big as human! The 38..keep eyes on this 19 year old like a chaperone
(Nice! The punch in the setup was pretty dope. I’m feeling the actual punch as well)
3-0? Today the surge die! U'll be shock...they thinking the lost why
Laser beam...it's cause i sat a lite through his chest like The Cable Guy
(This is a jab. The wp was good imo but ive heard satellite flips before.)
I grab the knife, catch ya pops drinking his beers...make him beg for life
Then i snatch ya moms up! She'll be missing out a Full House-Danny Tanners Wife
(Lol idk if everyone likes it but I like the “catch a nigga doing something stupid” type punches. It’s adds a bit of variety since your styles almost all gun bars. The punch here was pretty nice)
Circle back, if the witness told...im talking mid convo right before he fold
Flash from the cam..then clips catch him confessing at the table--First48 Episode
(Hmm this was between okay and pretty good)
I got you nervous...black mask with the machete! At ya door on some purge shit
The machine dispose all..when I hang off the truck dumping like a sanitation service
(Fire. Woulda been LOTB if DMS ain’t pull that crazy line outta nowhere)
Bruh DMS - you’re almost there my nigga. I honestly enjoy reading your verses cus I know you’re gonna have some slick punches and wp. And that closer was fire imo. You just gotta adapt your style for text battling.
Unfortunately, Dynamicz just has better execution than you at this stage of your text career. I also think you got outpunched - that nigga wasn’t really missing this battle...plus you had 4 fewer lines lol.
Dynamicz good consistent verse man. I think you took this one comfortably.
Mvgt Dynamicz
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