Tough battle. Really tough. Creativity flowed well here an both had wording down. Plot probs best bar I've ever read from you. Shit is stepped up. Fresh gun bar. Dyna I like the idea here it's pretty creative an set it up well but if I have to edge it plots taken it for me simply because I guessed your punchlines direction earlier then plots. Sometimes it's really that marginal. Could go either way but got plot with the slight edge
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Originally Posted by El Muffin
Jay Welsh took your lunch money
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Flow....that punch was disgusting. Mvgt Flow
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