Good work fellas, this was a good battle.
Bleak this was a good scheme - every part of the bar was related to the theme.. Bodyslam, pumphandle, are both good tie ins. My critique is the punch was fine but it didn’t feel like it landed heavy. The powerbomb wp isn’t crazy, it was just a continuation of the scheme - which is good but kinda leaves the door open.
Cash pretty good concept and you executed it very well. The bar came off as funny. I thought the swimming in shirts was really clever. The double meaning worked perfect both ways. Only critique is that comparatively, your punch wasn’t as harsh as bleak’s. I think you had the better punch by a really small margin.
mvgt Cashius
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