ok cool read.
it was a bit sporadic. it needed to focus more. and the content to me was kinda sophomoric. a little Eminem-ish from his Marshall Mathers LP. talkin bout killin bitches and stuff. dig deeper man. stuff like this isn't really worth much tbh. it wouldn't be something anyone would listen to on a track, and as far as reading it here it didn't do much for me. had a horrocore element, but if your gonna have no depth to the content the flow and structure (which wasn't bad) need to be better.
don't take it the wrong way, I just didn't really enjoy this piece and from the flashes you had I know you could do better. just not my cup of tea but I will be peeping future drops of yours.
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