Barc - I get the attempt, and understand what you were going for here & that its not a "wordplay" ... wording was good but not enough was done to tie I the armour / teeth reference, which is a pretty obscure reach in the first place.. I think u saw the under armor shirt on the kid and just focused on making a play out if it without thinking it thru
Amen - 'props' for gun bars and the pic play was cool, but I felt this could've been worded better and you could've made the punch better than just "he looks retarded" holding it..
Vote - Amen ... teeth/armor is just too big a reach imo
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