[Geno]

I'm ggonna need to start seeing responses from you on other peoples posts. You have a great enthusiams for posting your own -it should go both ways.

This post was cool. Had some crazy vocab in it. I would say to work on flow and format for now
By format I mean.. get rid of the paragraph style and use bars. A bar is two lines which feed off each other. I.e...

Example of a bar.
I'm the most rugged and sickest rhyme nut
To ever grab a bitch and shove my dick inside of

Also.. your flow could use some work, you have a lot of great vocab and ideas to go along with it. You need to work on more internal rhymes, multi syllable usage and even your ending rhyme schemes don't fit really well at times. There are some rhymes scattered throughout your pieces that definitely work.. just feel like you need to add a lot more of them. Work on those things and I think you'll be doing just fine.

Holla