DMS. I think this was a smart move to go the personal route here. This is a solid angle to take. I think that it was executed pretty basic (pretty much it was just a statement bar) but that was fine here. Not the best punch but enough go get the job done here.
Cereal you just gonna have to stick around the site a bit more and get a good grasp on crafting your punches. Gotta focus more on substance and less on rhyme schemes and how it sounds. Keep at it.
Mvgt DMS
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