Good battle here.
Inc set up the punch well - directly responding to Des saying he didn’t watch the vid. First line was good. I think the second line fell of a tad. I see where you were going with ‘Feast your eyes’ but it feels kinda just thrown in there for a tie in. The actual punch was clean. I do think it was a pretty simple flip but I do like the reference.
Overall, solid punch man and you’re def improving.
Unfortunately though, Des didn’t play around this week. The set up did the job. I’ve seen crisper wording from you before but it was still good. The punch itself was good. Excellent job of flipping Inc’s line from last week and also referencing the mag. I think it also played intro tour favor that your both had mag references, it yours was most impactful.
Good showing from Inc, but I got Des taking this one
Mvgt Des
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