hope she brought a one piece, ya girls got the curves of a beast..
mods removed 'Fat Wife' from the site.. u need to remove urs from the beach
(Good, quick thinking. Simple but very witty given when Dy posted that and when you dropped your verse. Good opener)
Nas anniversary week, best ever out of New York it’s true..
in 96 It Was Written... all over ur moms face she wished she aborted you
(Crisp execution of a very old concept. You would have need more Nas related tie ins to make this pop just because ‘your mom wished she aborted you’ is such a played concept)
kid's bitchmade w/ punches never known for pumpin foes..
so if he rolls up, i've got haymakers that'll KOD like i was bumpin Cole
(Cool. You shortened his name to D which isn’t very hard to flip but the wp was slick. Punch landed. Good execution)
acting all mr. nice guy to get votes but i wont start nagging ya kid..
cuz i ‘Aim to Plea's’ too.. scope locked while ur on ya knees begging to live
(I got this landing. Nice personal angle on a guy that doesn’t have too many personals against him. Pretty creative how you flipped it into a gun bar. My only critique is ‘aim to pleas’ is a bit of a reach. It would have to be ‘aim at’ or something to fit clean but I thought the concept was enough to carry it)
Toronto Sniper, so if ur truly down to ride w/ shotty’s..
i'll have the Stickhandle ya then Maple Leafs over you to hide the body
(I got this landing as a jab. This wasn’t too difficult of a flip since you didn’t give maple leaf any kinda second meaning. It was worded and executed well though which is why I have it landing)
silly virgin you're not a fly-guy, just a nerd n faker..
girls say they wanna Cyberdyne & u start talkin Sci-fi n’ the Terminator
(I dont get the wp in this one. Is it cyber dyn as in cyber sex? If so that’s light but I’m just going with I missed the reference on this one)
meanwhile i'm studly, steady known for givin hoes pleasure..
NO WAY a bitch is feelin Dynamo... she'd rather ask me to Go-Getter
(I’ve never heard dynamo used in this context and had to google it. Wp checks out though and is actually pretty slick. I like this)
we're not two in the same, ur liar u never played w/ guns..
difference is i broke-in homes.. you're orphan ass was just raised in some
(Lol this is funny. I like this line. Broken/broke in is pretty slick too)
plus ur the snitch type, always sellin out ur boys & trust cops..
give more information ‘Sneak-in the Wire’ than gang signs for drug spots
(Dang i don’t get this one either. I got the wire/snitching part but I don’t get the ‘gang signs for drug spots’ part)
We want that old Blue back, the idolized one who was labeled the text saver
I march in with a pack! When the stick twirling hand to hand it ain't a drum major
(This landed imo. The first and 2nd bar were going in too diff directions. I think this isn’t always a prob but this could have used a smoother transition. Also, I think sticks/drums has been done a lot but you had a unique spin on it. I think ‘March in with the pack’ was a really good tie in and it’s why I have this landing.)
Dickryding an slightly swaying! Your whole text career been non legit
Fight night? Real hook to his jaw, now lets see if you can accomplish this
(This was just okay imo. The concept itself is pretty basic and I just feel like you coulda did a bit more with that fight night situation lol. Also you prob shoulda ended the punch stronger)
This can't be life! The old you was nice, the new you gots to miss it
You can bring DOHPE, let it ring next to the equation like quantum physics
(Wow I never thought I’d hear a gun bar about quantum physics lmaoo. This is a very smart bar but the ‘equation’ part is what’s bothering me. You can definitely use equation as slang for “that” or “them” but it’s so uncommon that it still seems a bit forced. Conflicted because the bar definitely works and the rest of it - ring next to / quantum physics - is very creative. Overall I this as a good punch but can’t be mad at anyone who doesn’t get it)
After this take care! From the views, my gun in the middle like Malcom
Grip the what?...you Canadian thugs ain't gripping shit, but drake albums
(This was okay. I liked that you’re adding personals but you need to do a bit more with this. Slightly statementish)
Lets talk facts for a minute! That great mind ain't got with the times
Decaprio! Could of starred in Wolf Of Wall Street w/ all those stretched lines
(This is pretty good. Punch was just okay - cocaine/stretched lines isn’t crazy, but as a personal, I think this angle really hits.)
The gun transform, or Toronto slang-I let it get to morphing
Dome shot! I over reacted when I was shooting, I blew it out of proportion
(Ha this was nice. I appreciate the punching in the set up as well)
Think movie with Master P, soon as I seen contender I didn't care for a good luck
Debo! I had the choppers in the car looking for black & blue-I Got The Hook Up
(This took me a minute to get. I didn’t understand what the ‘Black’ was referring to at first (ironically lol). You coulda set this up/worded it better but I still think it was a good punch. Idk if most folks gonna catch this movie reference though - this isn’t the most popular movie)
Mentally break you down, even if I lose you gone feel the drift of me
This Legend thought nobody wouldn't vouch, Twice you had to question credibility
(I liked that you’re going for personals but this personal didn’t feel too harsh. Had a snf type feel too it opposed to a diss)
The metal with me everywhere, got me resembling a crusader
Catch you & the bitch you married! Let the beam light up the bed like Room Raiders
(Lol this is pretty clever. I’m not sure if everyone’s I’m going to catch this reference either (i don’t remember how popular that show was) but this was good. I’m feeling the punch in the set up as well)
This is a pretty dope battle here. Battle was neck and neck. A style clash for sure, but I also liked that you both stepped outside of your comfort zone. Dynamicz had the most personals I’ve seen from him and Blue with the gun bars and trying to punch dynamicz’s head off for a portion of the battle. I think this was a bit of a risk for both off y’all but y’all both executed it pretty well.
Both guys did their thing. I think the crazy thing about Blue is this nigga just doesn’t miss punches. His wording is so good that even if he doesn’t have the greatest punch, his wording is so crisp that the punch will still prob land. That was the case here. No misses here and very consistent.
DynamiCz your references and the phrases you use are going to get you into trouble. Ie the quantum physics bar - where you have to both know what quantum physics is and also need to be familiar with the slang you use. You gotta take into account that a lot of folks here are international as well. I understood them though so I’m judging accordingly.
Anyways, Blue was extremely consistent. However, I thought dynamicz was as well. I think blue has the cleaner wording. However, I think Dynamicz had a few heavier punches. Blue had the broken home bar being his heaviest bar. I think Dynamicz had a couple haymakers with the out of proportion bar being then the heaviest but a few bars that hit heavier than blues. I think this is close and will prob depend on what references you catch but I got Dy with the slight edge.
Mvgt dynamicz
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