[Pharaohs Army]

can scrambled the gambit gan gambled it
is 'gan' a word?

gang affiliate not a color more like billy the kid
my signs spoke existence in a static world
of resistance the instant my eyes opened
I'm having trouble finding the rhyme in these 3 lines at the end of the stanza.
I see Resistance and instant; that's about it.

better then you never will think and thats why im better
This sounds like a 2tripple0 line.

then a dead did a ble being difficult brings of bizzare
what in the world does this line mean? It's not even english.

loud smoke in church cows glow in dirt
can smoke be loud?
it's a good rhyme but pretty nonsensical. cows glow in dirt?

sub terrian roman earth with half gods fat boys
and loudmouths they observe cause
severity slayed dragons off the roundhouse
Not much rhyme on these final 3 lines of the stanza either. I see earth and observe; that's about it.

I'm not even gonna quote the last stanza because I thought it was even worse than the first 2.

Also, you misspelled 'than' as 'then' a couple times.

Sorry to be harsh but I find this to be supbar. I think you've got better in you; try again.