Cereal:
"so ima drop a dime in thought like the wording holds water..
because it only follows footsteps like a pig to the slaughter"
DMS:
"Judging by your rep tiles, the fact your a cake’s gone out boy
I’ll have this slitherin snake’s hair white, Draco Malfo"
Overall not much going on here in this battle. Both had only decent attempts. Cereal needs to focus more on punches and how they hit, most your wording was not good. DMS seems to be getting the hang of it, structure wise still needs some work. And DMS while I appreciate the compliment its not good to use someone else beating your opponent as a closer, possibly a first line set up if creative enough. In this case didn't think it worked well here. Ethier way props on both for showing but I got DMS....barley.
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