Both you guys had some dope concepts but gotta work on the execution. MMLP I liked the tie ins and the Star Wars reference but the punch itself just didn’t do it for me. Bongo, this was pretty clever. You gotta work on ending your lines with actual punches and not just mix subtle wordplay throughout. I think you got the job done here. Pretty impressed that you managed to do a name flip on someone named MMLP.
MVGT Bongo
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